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September 7, 2012
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9/7/2012. I put this in storage and it "ate" the faves. I feel bereft.
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:iconglossolalias:
creepy and strange. very well done.
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:iconbeeinthebottle:
Thank you. :)
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:iconbeyondjen:
*BeyondJen Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Look at your delving into flash fiction while I was away! And damn, I'm diggin' it!
I really enjoy the short and choppy sentences; they add to a quickening pace that matches the growing insanity of the piece. It's weird in the best of ways...if creepy was meant to be good. ;)

Nicely done with the repetition of the opening/ending line.

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:iconbeeinthebottle:
I've been having fun dabbling in prose, as you can see. :) "Creepy" is good, in this case. And thanks!
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:iconstormbringer23:
I had to create a new fav category just for this. Wow.
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:iconbeeinthebottle:
:aww: I'm flattered. :glomp:
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:iconstormbringer23:
I'll be watching for more creepy-ness. Does that make me a creep? :iconslipperyhugplz:
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:iconbeeinthebottle:
I don't think so. :) But I don't know that I'll creep again any time soon. This was pretty much a one-off.
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:iconstormbringer23:
Creepy could be a calling. It is for me. :D
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:iconalapip:
*alapip Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
frightening here to imagine
and think what bland event
helpless, into madness
might trigger our own descent...

[even into voting Republican] :D
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