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I really enjoy the short and choppy sentences; they add to a quickening pace that matches the growing insanity of the piece. It's weird in the best of ways...if creepy was meant to be good.
Nicely done with the repetition of the opening/ending line.
and think what bland event
helpless, into madness
might trigger our own descent...
[even into voting Republican]